European Journal of English Language Teaching
ISSN: 2501-7136
ISSN-L: 2501-7136
Available on-line at: www.oapub.org/edu
Volume 2 │ Issue 1 │ 2017
doi: 10.5281/zenodo.437760
TEACHERS’ CORRECTIVE FEEDBACK ON
ENGLISH STUDENTS’ WRITING
Nguyen Thi Thanh Thao,
Le Hai Duy
Dong Thap University, Vietnam
Abstract:
This investigates the participants’ attitudes towards corrective feedback as well as the
types of corrective feedback on learners’ performance by questionnaires for both
students and teachers. Fifty–eight 2nd-year students and 5 teachers of English at a
university in the Mekong Delta of Vietnam participated in the study. The results
indicated that students had a positive attitude towards teachers’ corrective feedback.
Besides, with the analyzed data, correction with comments and teacher correction was
considered as the most useful strategy when giving feedback in the learners’
performance. The outcomes of the study suggest a widespread employment of
corrective feedback in teaching writing at universities and colleges in the region.
Keywords: corrective feedback, writing, error, student, teacher
I. Introduction
Corrective feedback (CF) is considered as a key feature in teaching and learning
writing. According to Hashemnezhad and Mohammadnejad (2012), error treatment is
considered as an inseparable part of writing skill . The contribution of written feedback
helps learners have more chances to revise their writing in class immediately after they
have received written corrective feedback on their texts. It is a useful technique for the
learners to become more independent and more responsible for the linguistic quality of
their writing. Additionally, students will be more motivated if received positive
feedback from the teachers, and the classroom atmosphere will be more interesting, too.
Kao (2013) also suggested that the teachers should pay more attention to the
precise content of the feedback and the precise errors’ type targeted with the given
feedback since they were major features in determining the effectiveness of the
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corrective feedback on the learners’ written products. Furthermore, the researcher also
stressed that the focus on providing CF on specific linguistic features had a greater
benefit to not only the learners’ accuracy in the final product but their communication
as well.
Whereas the effectiveness of written corrective feedback on the learners’
performance has been confirmed through various studies all over the world, questions
about the students’ perspectives on corrective feedback on their writing and the type of
feedback perceived to be more effective to develop writing ability of second-year
students of English remain to be unanswered. For this reason, the present study,
especially in EFL classes in the Vietnamese context. Thus, the present study aims to
investigate the participants’ attitudes to corrective feedback on their writing and the
type of feedback believed to be more effective in developing the writing ability of
second-year students of English. Additionally, this study also aims to identify to what
extent corrective feedback affects the learners’ written text. Then, the teachers are able
to select an appropriate strategy to employ when giving feedback on the learners’
performance.
II. Literature review
1. The nature of writing
Klein (1985) refers to writing as the ability to put pen and paper to express ideas
through symbols. In this respect, representations on the paper can support the writer in
communicating to other people effectively with meaningful form and obvious content.
Moreover, writing is more than making our thoughts and ideas visible and concrete
(Ghaith, 2002). Writing is also a form of thinking; it is thinking for particular audience,
and for a particular occasion. Writing is also an important language expression activity,
so writing is process of thinking and feeling and of shaping experiences, and it is an
important medium for self-expression, for communication, and for the discovery of
meaning.
According to Jarvis (2002), mechanical aspect is the main feature of the productoriented approach. In other words, the correctness is paid more attention to in the final
product. Besides, the learners are asked to make a copy with the model and have an
appropriate style to the given topics. Meanwhile, in the process-oriented approach, the
students are taught the way to develop and organize ideas logically and smoothly in
the written product. In the process writing (Sarhady, 2015) learners are able to
acknowledge the way to cooperate in problem-solving tasks. Through drafting ang
redrafting, the learners’ writing ability improves. Besides, peer feedback and revision
are also vital in the cycle of process writing.
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2. Corrective feedback
Ellis (2009) argues that corrective feedback has a vital role in second language (L2)
learning and language pedagogy. In other words, corrective feedback is considered as a
medium to encourage the learners to acquire profound linguistic accuracy. Besides,
with the support of CF, teachers are able to acknowledge the method and the suitable
time to correct the learners’ written texts. With regards to the effect of CF, providing CF
will prompt the learners to organize, structure and modify knowledge. Furthermore, CF
is a useful way to preserve the knowledge about grammatical features in a long term
memory (Maleki & Eslami, 2013).
Direct corrective feedback is considered as a strategy to help learners correct
their errors by providing the correct form of the target language. Some researchers have
studied the effects of direct CF on the learners’ grammatical accuracy and writing
quality. In Zareil and Rahnama’s study
, in terms of grammatical accuracy, the
participants were able to achieve better performance with the support of direct CF.
Similarly, Kao (2013) ensured that learners got a significant improvement in employing
English articles correctly when direct corrective feedback was given. In other words, in
terms of accuracy in learners' writing, direct corrective treatment is actually a valuable
means (2013). Hashemnezhad and Mohammadnejad (2012) also conducted a survey on
the effect of direct and indirect feedback on the learners’ written products. The
participants were the third -year ESL students. Two experimental groups were formed
with two kinds of CF, direct CF and indirect CF respectively. Direct corrective feedback
was given by identifying both the error and providing the target form. And then
indirect corrective feedback was used in the form of codes. The text book, Academic
Writing Course, was applied in the present study. This instrument is about specific
steps to write from paragraph structuring to essay writing through a process approach.
A variety of writing tasks and models was given to help the participants have
remarkable improvement in writing skill. With a detailed investigation, the findings
showed that the learners in the direct CF group were able to acquire the knowledge of
grammatical points profoundly. Particularly, the direct CF ensures the learners have
more accuracy when employing the past simple tense, relative pronouns and the
preposition in new writing tasks.
Indirect corrective feedback occurs when an incorrect form is made, but no direct
correction is made. Indirect corrective feedback also plays an important role in
improving learners’ proficiency level in writing an essay or composition. Zareil and
Rahnama (2013) investigated the effect of corrective feedback on the grammatical and
lexical writing accuracy. In the current study, the participants were the students who
major in English. Their proficiency level ranged from lower-intermediate to
intermediate. They were formed into six intact groups. X considered as the control
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group with no CF. A version of the Michigan Test of English Language Proficiency
(MTELP) was provided in the pretest. The current test was applied in order to ensure
the knowledge of the learners about gramma, lexicon and reading. In addition, the
learners were requested to complete the writing test in the posttest. The main goal of
the posttest was to confirm the effect of various types of CF on grammatical and lexical
accuracy utilized in the study. The findings show uncoded CF, a kind of indirect
feedback, has more remarkable importance in improving the learners’ lexical accuracy
in their writing tasks.
3. The focus of the feedback
Focused written CF is applied by underlining the error, writing the target form above it
with the errors in a specific target structure (i.e. prepositions). Then unfocused written
CF gives direct written CF on the errors in a range of linguistic structures (i.e. articles,
prepositions, verb tenses). Sheen et al. (2009) studied the differential effects of focused
and unfocused written correction on the accurate use of grammatical forms by adult
ESL learners. The participants were native-English speaking teachers and intermediate
level students in an ESL program. During the research, all students were taking an
intermediate reading or writing course. Four groups were divided – one control and
three experimental groups. Focus written CF, unfocused written CF and writing
practice were the main issues in the experimental groups. The grammatical target for
the focused CF group was the use of English definite and indefinite articles whereas the
target for the unfocused CF group was articles, be , regular past tense, irregular past
tense and preposition. Two written CF experimental groups were asked to complete
two written narrative tasks separately. Other two written tasks were also given to
Written Practice group. The results of the study indicated that the focused CF group
achieved the best performance. In this sense, focused written error correction helps the
learners have more accuracy in their written tasks than unfocused correction addressed
in a range of grammatical errors.
4. Electronic corrective feedback
Electronic feedback uses computer as a means to give written CF to the learners. In this
sense, with the useful tools in the computer, the learners are able to receive completely
precise feedback about spelling, grammatical features. Chang et al. (2012) claimed that
in their online survey, with three closed-ended questions and two open-ended
questions, undergraduate participants preferred e-feedback for its accessibility,
timeliness, and legibility. McGrath and Leadbeater (2016) conducted two studies about
the acquisition and the attitude of the learners about the use of digital media for writing
composition especially electronic feedback. In both studies, the instructors’ comments
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and interviews were employed on electronic copies of the students’ written drafts that
could be revised and resubmitted. The analysis of Study 1 revealed that unexplained
editing changes made the learners more confused. In contrast, the learners had more
responsibilities in revision session in their written product with the support of detailed
comments. On the other hand, in Study 2, the learners had a positive attitude about the
convenience, legibility, organization, and quantity of feedback when provided
electronically. The final results in the current studies revealed that the learners are able
to make an improvement in writing skill if the teachers or instructors employ more
electronic feedback in their written text.
5. Reformulation
Reformulation is also considered as a technique in giving feedback. Reformulation is
employed by rewriting the correct form of the target language, but the original text is
kept. Several studies were conducted to investigate the effect of reformulation strategies
in the field of writing. Kadkhodaei et al. (2013) emphasizes the role of reformulation
tasks including comparison, paraphrasing, and copying activities in improving EFL
learners’ accuracy when an essay is composed. Storch and Wigglesworth
examined how direct feedback (reformulations) and indirect feedback (editing symbols,
i.e. providing the codes above the errors affected the learners’ written text. The study
was carried out with 12 pairs. The first experimental group received feedback in the
form of reformulation; the other one with the form of editing. After completing three
separate sessions and comprehensive analysis, the researcher concluded that the
learners outperformed when editing was applied to their written product. In this sense,
reformulation has a little help in encouraging the learners acquire the knowledge of
grammar and word meanings. In another study of Ibarrola (2013), the researcher
compared the effectiveness of two correction strategies (reformulation and selfcorrection) for EFL writing. The study was carried out in two sessions with the
mentioned strategies. All types of errors were coded including grammar, vocabulary,
spelling, punctuation and errors of coherence and cohesion. Reformulation of every
student’s production is not easily applicable to the classroom due to time limitations
and task difficulty for the teacher. The statistical analysis demonstrated that
reformulation and self-correction helped the learners reduce more errors in the
composition. Especially, reformulation had more positive effect than the other strategy
in correcting errors. On the other hand, when employing reformulation in EFL
classroom, the teacher should be more carefully since it is able to be a time-consuming
strategy.
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III. Methods
1. Research questions
To draw out the conclusion about the participants’ attitudes towards teachers’
corrective feedback in their performance, the researcher made an attempt to answer the
following questions:
1. What are the EFL students’ attitudes towards teacher corrective feedback in their
writing?
2. What amount of corrective feedback do the students think is most useful?
3. Which type of feedback is more effective to develop the writing ability of second–year
students of English?
2. Participants
The sample for the present study was 5 teachers of English and 58 students from two
writing classes at Dong Thap University (Vietnam). The teacher participants belonged
to the Faculty of Foreign Languages at Dong Thap University. Their experience of
teaching English ranged between one and fifteen years. The student participants were
the second – year students. They also majored in English in the Faculty of Foreign
Languages. It means that they were at the same level of English proficiency. There are
some reasons for selecting these students. First, they were equipped with the basic
knowledge about writing skill. Second, they were not actually able to acquire the error
treatment in their final product. In other words, they were not able to make their
written texts more understandable and attractive to the readers.
3. Research instruments
For this study, the questionnaire was adapted from Amrhein & Nassaji (2010) and
Mubarak (2013). The questionnaire on students’ attitudes towards corrective feedback
(see Appendix 1) was developed to acknowledge what the students thought about
corrective feedback. The first section was used to introduce to the study and emphasize
the role of the participants. The second section investigated participants’ background
information including the academic specialization and the academic year. The third
section focused on the participants’ overview of feedback. It included one multiple
choice and three questions designed in a five – point Likert scales from Always, Often,
Sometimes, Rarely to Never. The following section consisted of four questions about the
learners’ attitudes towards corrective feedback with the Likert scales items Strongly
agree, Agree, Don’t know, Disagree, Strongly disagree. The last section focused on feedback
practice with a multiple choice question, yes – no question and Likert scales items: Not
useful at all, Not useful, Doesn’t matter, Quite useful, Very useful.
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The questionnaire on teachers’ attitudes towards corrective feedback
“ppendix
see
modified from the students’ questionnaire was used to collect the data on
teachers’ attitudes towards corrective feedback. This questionnaire was not significantly
different from the students’ version in content but there were some minor changes in
the wording to make it valid for the ultimate aim. For example, like students’
questionnaire, the first section of the teachers’ questionnaire stressed the important role
of the participants. However, the second section had a little difference such as adding
the information about academic degree; and changing from academic year to years of
teaching experience. Similar to students’ questionnaire, there were also three sections
on the following clusters the participants’ overview of feedback the learners’ attitudes
towards corrective feedback; and feedback practice.
4. Procedure of data collection
The data on the students’ and the teachers’ attitudes towards corrective feedback was
collected by the researcher within two weeks in February, 2016. Fifty – eight copies
were delivered to 58 majored – English students from two writing classes, Faculty of
Foreign Languages. The questionnaire was implemented after the participants
completed their lessons in the classroom. Careful instructions were employed in order
to have the reliable results.
Firstly, the students were presented the purpose of the study as well as the way
to supply their background information in the first section of the questionnaire. Then,
they were explained to respond to each item by checking for their appropriate degree of
agreement on a five – point Likert scale ranging from Always, Often, Sometimes, Rarely to
Never and select the best answer for the given multiple choice question. Continually, the
participants were asked to pay more attention to the questions about the attitudes
towards corrective feedback since the current item had a different Likert scale. They
were organized from Strongly agree, Agree, Don’t know, Disagree to Strongly disagree.
Finally, the last section was actually the complicated issue for the participants. Since
they not only provided the appropriate statements for each item but give more
explanation for their given choice. However, the students were encouraged to ask any
questions if they have any difficulties in understanding the questionnaire. As a result, it
took the participants about twenty minutes to complete the questionnaire.
Unlike the process of collecting students’ questionnaire, teachers’ questionnaire
was selected by e-mails. Particularly, the teacher participants would be shortly
explained the purpose of the study. It is clear the current participants have a right
understanding for each questionnaire item. They were willing to complete twelve items
on the questionnaire. Then, their responses were collected after one week.
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5. Data analysis
First, the data obtained from the questionnaire was transferred to Statistic Package for
the Social Sciences (SPSS) for data analysis. The five – point scales were coded, from
“lways, Often, Sometimes, Rarely to Never, from Strongly agree, “gree, Don’t know,
Disagree to Strongly disagree and from Not useful at all, Not useful, Doesn’t matter,
Quite useful to Very useful respectively. The three major features of the questionnaire
were analyzed with Descriptive Statistic Test for quantitative data.
IV. Findings
Table 1: Students’ Responses to Question , ,
Students’ Reponses
Question
Always
No.
1. Does your instructor return your writing?
%
Often
No.
Sometimes
%
No.
Rarely
%
Never
No.
%
No.
%
24
41.4
27
46.6
6
10.3
1
1.7
0
0
28
48.3
21
36.2
8
13.8
1
1.7
0
0
20
34.5
30
51.7
7
12.1
0
0
1
1.7
3. Do you get feedback on your writing from the
teacher?
4. Does the teacher discuss your writing errors
with you after he/she returns your writing?
Table 2: Students’ Responses to Question
Students’ Reponses
Question 2
A. During the same class
B. The
in which the writing is
handed
No.
%
C. No later
Later than (A),
following
than
(B) and (C)
class
one week
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
When do you normally get
your writings back from the
24
41.4
27
46.6
6
10.3
1
1.7
teacher?
From the table
& , it indicated that teacher’s responsibility was expressed clearly.
Returning students’ writings, giving feedback on their writings, discussing the errors
with them after returning the writings and discussing achieved the same percentage:
. %. It was found that the teacher respected students’ papers. Teacher effort actually
had a great help in making students have a profound knowledge about the errors.
Additionally, teacher effort was made so that students reinforced their performance in
writing skill.
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Table 3: Students’ Responses to Question , , ,
Students’ Reponses
Strongly
Question
agree
No.
5. I prefer getting feedback.
Don’t
Agree
%
No.
Disagree
know
%
No.
Strongly
disagree
%
No.
%
No.
%
36
62.1
18
31.0
4
6.9
0
0
0
0
3
5.2
2
3.4
9
15.5
29
50
14
24.1
24
41.4
29
50
3
5.2
1
1.7
1
1.7
28
48.3
25
43.1
5
8.6
0
0
0
0
. My teacher’s feedback makes me
unwilling to do the task again.
. My teacher’s feedback helps me improve
my writing.
8. I would like to receive more feedback on
my writing in the future.
Table 3 shows more than 90% students preferred getting feedback (Strong agree and
Agree), and would like to receive more feedback on their performance in the future.
Furthermore, with the teachers’ corrective feedback,
. % claimed that they wanted to
compose their following writings, and 91.4% showed that they were able to make an
improvement from the support of the teachers’ feedback.
Table 4: Teachers’ Responses to Question , , ,
Teachers’ Reponses
Question
Always
No.
%
Often
No.
%
Sometimes
Rarely
No.
N
%
Never
%
No.
%
o.
1. Do you give feedback on your students' writing?
1
2
0
4
80
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
2. Do you write comments at the end of the students’
writing?
3. Do you make students hand in a second draft of
their writing?
0
0
2
40
3
60
0
0
0
0
0
2
40
3
1
20
2
20
0
4. Do students consult you for more explanation after
receiving feedback?
2
4
0
6
0
0
With the given responses, the results showed that the teachers had a strong agreement
with corrective feedback on the learners’ performance. It means that they were willing
to give feedback with specific comment at the end of the students’ writing. Moreover,
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they were able to give more explanation if the problems about the feedback were raised.
However, 60% teachers rarely asked their students to hand in their second draft
writing. On the other hand, teachers claimed that they should have responsibilities in
giving more explanation for students’ writing. That would help the students
acknowledge their errors profoundly and avoid making the same errors in the future.
Table 5: Teachers’ Responses to Question , , ,
Teachers’ Reponses
Strongly
Question
agree
No.
5. Students benefit from the feedback I give
them on their writing.
%
Don’t
Agree
No.
Disagree
know
%
Strongly
disagree
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
0
0
5
100
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
1
20
2
40
2
40
0
0
0
0
0
0
2
40
3
60
1
20
4
80
0
0
0
0
0
0
6. In general, students do not benefit from
written feedback.
7. It is preferable not to give feedback to
students at all.
8. It is the duty of teachers to always provide
feedback on students’ writing.
From table 5 above, it demonstrates that teachers are responsible for providing
feedback on students’ writing. ”esides, with the help of corrective feedback, teachers
are also able to give the students more opportunities to improve their written product.
It means that teachers acknowledged their important role in helping the students
review their errors and enhance their understanding about the mentioned errors
profoundly. On the other hand, in terms of care from the teachers for their students’
writing, giving feedback helps the students have more motivation and make a
remarkable progress when they learn specific skill.
Table 6: Responses to Question 9
Options
Students
No.
%
Teachers
No.
%
mark all errors
46
79.3
1
20
mark all major errors but not the minor ones
10
17.2
0
0
mark most of the major errors, but not necessarily all of them
3
5.2
3
60
mark only a few of the major errors
2
3.4
1
20
mark only the errors that interfere in imparting your ideas
24
41.4
3
60
mark no errors and respond only to the ideas and content
0
100
0
100
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In terms of the students’ view, it could be easy to recognize that marking all errors
made up the highest percent with the frequency of 46. In contrast, 60% teachers
emphasized correcting most of the major errors. It means that if marking all errors in
the students’ writing product makes students more passive in their learning process.
Hence, most teachers should pay more attention to correct the errors in order that
teachers are not able to reduce students’ motivation in producing their written texts. On
the other hand, ideas have a significant role in rectifying errors in students’ assignment.
41.4% was the percentage that should have a look. Similarly, teachers also expressed
their agreement in the current solution. In other words, applying the present feedback
helps students acknowledge the way to make the ideas in the essay or in the paragraph
logically.
Table 7: Students’ Responses to Question
Students’ Reponses
Type of feedback
Not useful
Not
Doesn’t
Quite
Very
at all
useful
matter
useful
useful
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
Look at Section 2 in grammar book
A. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
5
8.6
11
19.0
6
10.3
21
36.2
14
24.1
6
10.3
17
29.3
5
8.6
27
46.6
2
3.4
4
6.9
5
8.6
5
8.6
15
25.9
27
46.6
2
3.4
11
19.0
7
12.1
22
37.9
15
25.9
8
13.8
20
34.5
9
15.5
17
29.3
2
3.4
40
69.0
15
25.9
1
1.7
1
1.7
0
0
39
67.2
7
12.1
7
12.1
4
6.9
0
0
very lonely.
B. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
C. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
have been (wrong tense)
D. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
have been
E. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
WRONG TENSE
F. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
G. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
I’m sorry to hear that
From table 7, for option A, 60.3% students thought that the teacher gave clues or
directions on how students are able to correct their work usefully or quite usefully.
Giving directions helped students perceive their errors easily. Meanwhile, for option B
only around 50%. The table also indicated that correction with comments and/or teacher
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correction made up the agreement (Quite useful and Useful) with 72.5%, 63.8 %, 32.7%
respectively (option C, D, E). Particularly, 94.9% agreed (option F) that with no
feedback on errors, the teacher did not have any responsibility/provide any usefulness
for their assignments. In addition, it was rather complicated for students to search and
rectify their errors. Furthermore, this somehow suggests that no error was made in
students; thus they would ignore their papers and no improvement was made.
Finally, approximately 80% participants expressed their disagreement with
giving personal feedback on the ideas or contents of the writing assignment (Option G).
Clearly, the teacher’s comment was rather general; since the participants need more
information about the writing more than the personal comment.
Table 8: Teachers’ Responses to Question
Teachers’ Reponses
Type of feedback
Not useful
Not
Doesn’t
Quite
Very
at all
useful
matter
useful
useful
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
No.
%
Look at Section 2 in grammar book
A. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
B. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
0
0
0
0
1
20
3
60
1
20
0
0
1
20
2
40
2
40
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
0
3
60
2
40
0
0
1
20
0
0
3
60
1
20
0
0
1
20
1
20
3
60
0
0
4
80
1
20
0
0
0
0
0
0
1
20
2
40
2
40
0
0
0
0
C. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have been (wrong tense)
Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have been
E. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
WRONG TENSE
F. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
G. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am
very lonely.
I’m sorry to hear that
Up to 80% teachers argued (option A) that clues or directions on how to fix an error had
a great help for students. Since students are able to look back at their lessons and review
what they have learned or at least when the teacher point out the error or give
suggestion for correcting the error. Besides, only 40% teachers claimed (option B) that
the teacher points out where the errors occur but without correction is quite useful.
They would like their students will probably need to review their lessons to find out the
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way to correct their mistakes. The current solution also gives them opportunities
improve their knowledge about the errors. With 100% and 80% respectively, teachers
argued that correction with comments and teacher correction are the best options for
correcting errors in the students’ writing products. It means that giving specific
correction is really of great help because of the following reasons. Meanwhile, 60%
teachers argued that making comments about errors without correction also has a little
help in the students’ writing. Finally, no feedback on an error or a personal comment on
the writing content is not a useful way in writing feedback chosen by 100% teachers.
V. Conclusion
According to the statistical data, correction with comments and teacher correction are
considered as direct feedback. The present options are effective ways to give feedback
in the students’ writing. “pplying these solutions, not only help the learners improve
the accuracy in their writing but also have a profound knowledge about grammatical
points. These findings correspond to the research Zareil and Rahnama (2013);
Hashemnezhad and Mohammadnejad (2012). These researches emphasizes the
important role of direct feedback when the researchers correct the errors about English
articles, past simple tense, relative pronoun and prepositions. On the other hand, in
terms of teacher’s view, clues or directions on how to fix an error, referred as indirect
feedback, is really helpful for the students. In the research of Zareil and Rahnama
(2013); Purnawarman (2011), these researchers states that using the current option help
the learners make improvement in the second revision and a new essay in the future.
Also, students have positive attitude towards corrective feedback. Both teachers
and the students are willing to provide and receive corrective feedback in students’
writing. In terms of teachers, it emphasizes teachers’ care in the students’ performance.
Hence, it will make an active and comfortable atmosphere in the classroom and then the
students have more interest in learning process. In terms of students, they will be more
independent in looking for the appropriate data in order to correct their errors.
Consequently, they will have a great understanding about the errors and make an
increase in their writing. With the fluency and the logic in the writing, their readers will
be attracted.
Regarding the amounts of corrective feedback in the students’ writing, students
prefer to receive as much feedback as possible. It means that their performance has
more teachers’ attention. Then, their errors will not take place in the following writing
assignment. However, there is also a drawback. If there are many given feedbacks in
the students’ writing, it will discourage them. It is certain that they do not have any
improvement. Therefore, in terms of teachers’ view, they claim that most of the major
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errors should be corrected. Besides, teachers should consider the errors related to the
ideas since the ideas also play vital role in the students’ works. If the ideas are arranged
in a logical way, their writing will get more attention from the readers. Finally, in
students’ view, correction with comments and teacher correction are the best options.
Since they are appropriate method to help, the learners acknowledge the errors
effectively. Similarly, in the view of teachers, clues or directions on how to fix an error,
correction with comments and teacher correction are also a great help for students.
Applying the present options, the students are able to know exactly the related
information and correct the errors by their own.
Additionally, both teachers and students disagree that no feedback on errors and
a personal feedback should not be applied in the students’ written products. Firstly, the
students will be confused that their writing assignment is right or wrong and if this
situation continues for a long time, the motivation for learning will be make a decrease.
Then, since no information about their errors is given therefore, the students’ belief on
teacher’ professional level will not increase. Consequently, teachers should be carefully
when giving feedback in the students’ performances. In other words, teachers should
consider the following aspects related to the students: the behavior, the preference and
the proficiency level. If the current aspects are applied logically and effectively, the
students’ written products will get more improvement.
VI. Recommendation
First, teachers are not required to give feedback on learner writings all the time or on
every aspect. Short, simple and necessary feedbacks are good. “fter any students’
works, teachers can give simple or motivated feedbacks to students or even short and
light remarks so that students are able to notice that their teachers are paying attention
to their works and encourage them. Effective feedbacks can much motivate the learning
process. Hence, teachers should be aware of selecting the appropriate feedbacks to
learners. Secondly, teachers should involve the students more in the process of giving
feedback. Teachers should not let students react passively to the feedback. It means that
teachers are able to request students to give their ideas about their friends’ works.
Hence, teachers should encourage them to take part in feedback activities and avoid
criticizing them even when they give wrong remarks. In addition, teachers are able to
give some situations related to students’ errors and ask them for their feedbacks. From
those activities, students are able to be acquainted with giving feedbacks themselves
and notice their errors easier.
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APPENDIX 1
Questionnaire for Students
This questionnaire is used to investigate teachers’ corrective feedback on the writing of
second-year students of English at the university in the Mekong Delta. The following
questionnaire is a very crucial part in my study. Your answers will be a basic
foundation for my study results. All the personal information will be kept confidential.
Section 1: Background information
Academic Specialization:
Academic year (1st/ 2nd/ 3rd/ 4th):
Section 2: General Overview of Feedback
Please put a tick () that best describes your response to the questions:
1. Does your instructor return your writing?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
2. When do you normally get your writing back from the teacher?
A. During the same class in which the writing is handed
B. The following class
C. No later than one week
D. Later than (A), (B) and (C)
3. Do you get feedback on your writing from the teacher?
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Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
4. Does the teacher discuss your writing errors with you after he / she returns your
writing?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
Disagree
Strongly disagree
Section 3: The Attitudes towards Feedback
5. I prefer getting feedback to no feedback.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
. My teacher’s feedback makes me unwilling to do the task again.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
Strongly disagree
Disagree
Strongly disagree
. My teacher’s feedback helps me improve my writing.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
8. I would like to receive more feedback on my writing in the future.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
Strongly disagree
Section 4: Feedback Practice
9. If there are many errors in your writing, what do you think your English teacher
should do? You can check more than one.
A. Teacher should mark all errors.
B. Teacher should mark all major errors but not the minor ones.
C. Teacher should mark most of the major errors, but not necessarily all of them.
D. Teacher should mark only a few of the major errors.
E. Teacher should mark only the errors that interfere in imparting your ideas.
F. Teacher should mark no errors and respond only to the ideas and content.
Please explain the reason for your choice (s).
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10. The following sentences all have the same errors and a teacher has given a different
type of feedback for each. Please put a tick () that best describes the usefulness of the
feedback for students.
Type of feedback
Not
Not
Doesn’t
Quite
Very
useful at
useful
matter
useful
useful
all
look at Section 2 in grammar book
A. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
B. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
C. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have
been
(wrong
tense)
D. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have been
E. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
WRONG TENSE
F. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
G. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
I’m sorry to hear that
----------------------------Appendix 2
Questionnaire for Teachers
This questionnaire is used to investigate teachers’ corrective feedback on the writing of
second-year students of English at the university in the Mekong Delta. The following
questionnaire is a very crucial part in my study. Your answers will be a basic
foundation for my study results. All the personal information will be kept confidential.
Section 1: Background Information
Academic Degree:
Academic Specialization:
Years of Teaching Experience:
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Section 2: General Overview of Feedback
Please put a tick () that best describes your response to the questions:
1. Do you give feedback on your students' writing?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
. Do you write comments at the end of the students’ writing?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
3. Do you make students hand in a second draft of their writing?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
4. Do students consult you for more explanation after receiving feedback?
Always
Often
Sometimes
Rarely
Never
Section 3: Attitudes towards Feedback
5. Students benefit from the feedback I give them on their writing.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
Strongly
disagree
6. In general, students do not benefit from written feedback.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
Strongly
disagree
7. It is preferable not to give feedback to students at all.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
Strongly disagree
. It is the duty of teachers to always provide feedback on students’ writing.
Strongly
agree
Agree
Don’t know
Disagree
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Section 4: Feedback Practice
. If there are many errors in students’ writing, what do you think is most useful to do?
Please check all that apply.
A. mark all errors
B. mark all major errors but not the minor ones
C. mark most of the major errors, but not necessarily all of them
D. mark only a few of the major errors
E. mark only the errors that interfere in imparting the ideas
F. mark no errors and respond only to the ideas and content
Please explain the reason for your choice (s).
10. The following sentences all have the same errors and a teacher has given a different
type of feedback for each. Please put a tick () that best describes the usefulness of the
feedback for students.
Type of feedback
Not useful at
Not
Doesn’t
Quite
Very
all
useful
matter
useful
useful
Look at Section 2 in grammar book
A. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
B. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
C. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have been (wrong tense)
D. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
have been
E. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
WRONG TENSE
F.
Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
G. Since I arrived in Victoria, I am very
lonely.
I’m sorry to hear that
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